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Will somebody please tell me what they think of my song?other categories won't answer me?

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times are getting boring. day are lingering. weeks turn into months, and seasons pass by. every feels the same, so dry. i wanna go back to the beggining where everything in our relationship was new and fresh; like a flower blooming on a spring day. anticipation waits....

chorus:now when we're standing right underneath the waterfall, sun shining in our face i feel like i'm in that special place. it's where we're ment to be. in each other's arms it's a locking embrace. the taste of the water is as pure as your soul, now that's why i wanna stay in this special place.

whe the sun illuminates your eyes i see all the colors of the rainbow. the way tears swell up in your eyes and burst onto the seams of your face with pride makes me feel alive. now i know the heavens must be shining down on us from above. chorus repeat

as we're swinging on the vines, i now this is only a moment in time, but when we go under together it seems like eternity does have a place.chorus repeat

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  1. sounds pretty good, would like to know what sort of music you intended to put it with??


  2. i think its really good

    good luck :]

  3. nice

  4. yeha you know, it's alright.

    is it suppose to be slow. or fast. um yeah.

    work on it.

    do you sing well??

  5. i cant judge whats coming from your heart, lol

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