Will you berate my poem?

Question

I used to Q

pension book in hand

at my local PO

and stand

in a queue

with all those oldsters

that I knew

but now they've closed the

office down

and we must make it

into town

the bus pass gets us there for free

but then we join the vast melee

a single PO for everybod

a single lady on her tod

Cashier Number Three please

Someone's sending a parcel to Belize

We all turn to each other and say

we're gonna be here all ****** day.

Answer 1

Your thoughts put down on paper - good onya!!

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