Will you critique my pantoum?

Question

I'm a 15-yr old poet, and this is the first one I've ever done:

Thunder sings

in dancing darkness,

raining crystal

and flashing fire.

In dancing darkness

hurling bolts

and flashing fire

spark and burst in brawling clouds.

Hurling bolts,

liquid static,

spark and burst in brawling clouds...

careening through protesting tress.

Liquid static,

raining crystal...

careening through protesting trees...

Thunder sings.

Answer 1

thats good