Will you help me with my babysitting ad?

Question

I made an ad for my sister to babysit. She doesnt have another car so she cant get a job outside the home and she doesnt have internet so she cant do online surveys and stuff. Anyways, I made her an ad for babysitting because she loves children and that would be somthing she could do at home.

What should I change? Would you hire her from this ad?

Need a Babysitter?

Hi! My name is Brittany Bly. I’m 21 years old and would like to start babysitting. I am a very reliable, nice, honest, and straight forward person. I love kids and have had a lot of experience with them. I had a little girl that lived with me, which I took care of from the age 2months through 18 months. I have also had experience with other children. I have always considered myself to be a good person with them, along with other people who have seen me around children.

I would be more than happy to visit with you about any questions you may have and can provide any needed references to help make your decision.

Answer 1

heck if I could afford a babysitter I would call, and make an appointment to meet.  That sounds great to me :)

Answer 2

New Home Babysitter Opening in Landon (name the neighborhood/area where you are located).

Hi! Reliable 21 year old loves kids and has lots of  experience.

I would be more than happy to visit with you about any questions you may have and can provide any needed references to help make your decision.

My apartment is a very clean and open environment for your children to play. I like to plan and do activities with the kids. Children`s work is play and we have structured playtime as well as free time for their imaginations to grow. For infants I hold and talk to and play with them as well and provide floor time as they grow for their physical development.

I am will watch children, boys and girls, ages 0-12 years of age. I will work within your budget if I can so you can afford quality care for your children when you have to be away from them. I can also work with your hours and provide the flexibility you need for your work schedule and other obligations.

Please call me at [phone] so we can discuss your schedule and your children`s needs.

Thank you!

Brittany Bly