Will you listen to my song and see what you think of it?

Question

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=spP5TMxJxQU

i asked this earlier but i recorded a new one so you can see me!hey so i just asked this, but heres the lyrics. its not done and i recorded it quickly but just wanted feedback! sorry its quiet! just follow along with the lyrics

thanks

LYRICS:

saw our picture on my wall

just a frame filled with me and a stranger

such a short amount of time

for you and me to go from happy to in danger

so listen as you turn your back to walk away

even if its the last thing that i get the chance to say

as time goes by there builds a gap in the line

in the chain

from the pain

between you and me and what we used to be

hope you considered that there may be no fix

no repair

nothings there

to bridge that gap of empty time

empty chair across the table

your the missing person

but im not missing you

only wish that you hadn't changed

and that we wouldn't be left like this

so listen as you turn your back to walk away

even if its the last thing that i get the chance to say

as time goes by there builds a gap in the line

in the chain

from the pain

between you and me and what we used to be

hope you considered that there may be no fix

no repair

nothings there

to bridge that gap of empty time

Answer 1

wow you have a lovley voice.

Answer 2

wow this is a nice song girl keep it up u have a nice voice also!!! :)

Answer 3

its a good song. u have a really nice voice btw (:

Answer 4

WOW!

you are amazing, seriously i'm not just saying that.

I would never have the confidence to sing AND show my face (because i have a c**p voice) but honestly your wonderful and confidence is what you need to get far in life.

Please show someone your talent :)

Also, it's brilliant you write your own songs, you have alot of talent and it's time the freakin world SAW IT :)

xx

Answer 5

   I myself get tired of love songs. Don't get me wrong .I like to see new talent. Change it up a little. It's kind of drowny. No big chorus. Like to hear some solo work.  I have to be a critic.  It's nice

Answer 6

The lyrics are very poetic, and you have an amazing voice,

good luck with life...