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Will you please evaluate the tenacity of this poem?

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Nobody is God-

less.

Nobody weeps for strangers.

No-

body etches their name in the glass

in a tin shed

with the hot stove

too close to the skin.

Nobody lives for nothing. We

all get scorched

by the sun.

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  1. we persist we carry on

    maybe we are our own God

    we can all show mercy

    we leave our mark on the world

    summer comes around..

    if it get's too hot in the kitchen..

    step outside and smell the jasmine.

    chill under the old oak..throw in a line..


  2. Tenacious with a capital D.

  3. HOT, very HOT

  4. it is adhesive, sticky,  viscous and  glutinous.

    *****

    <-------- learning to use the dictionary.

  5. I think it has a lot of depth, I liked it a lot♥

    You have a lot of tenacity, just putting this on yahoo answers....♥

  6. quite different from your other poems. I liked it though.  Just don't get to close to that stove. LOL

  7. Among other things we would have to give you an A for being tenacious in your life in general Buk. No one could call you a quitter.

    In spite of the differences among people we all seem to share common experiences  and at times common reactions. We all have life and each of us have some purpose. None of us escape the trials in life, and yes, indeed, we all get scorched by the sun at times. But the sun can also bring us new life and growth.

  8. It's cohesive in it's own way, so I would say it's moderately tenacious... the meter escapes me... but I like it :)

  9. Wow, deep.

  10. I would if I could!

  11. Your tenacity motivates...

    We are all one in the same...

    even though you're white and I'm yellow...

  12. you are Tenacious DPM.

  13. Your poem is a most tenacious one, Buk!

  14. very deep in thoughts. the words in the poem says that we are who we are and no one can change us.

  15. ..Here poet is showing his view regarding life..Its very deep tenacity..as he is showing his past experiences..and clear the way for upcoming persons...

    Great poem..!

  16. sure

  17. You'll have to 'splain to me how the word 'tenacity" applies to this poem....it shows depth, brilliance and our own universality, but the only way tenacity comes to mind is when I think of the man who wrote it.

    A dull student, Always

  18. Solid as a rock

  19. Persistent in maintaining, adhering to, or seeking something valued or desired.This poem is crying out to find that there is still good in this world.

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