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Will you please rate my new poem?

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Sometimes, people like it

Sometimes, not

It doesn’t matter where you can do it

It can show different meanings

It could show love

It could mean saving lives

Or, it means nothing to another

It’s a hug

Hug can be use in dramatic time

Hug could be our support

Hug shows a strong bond

Although, it’s just more than that

A hug shows that you care about someone

A hug is a powerful message

A hug means you are important to me

A strong hug means I won’t let you go

Every hug has a meaning to everything

Every person could use a hug no matter what

The hug could make you feel better

Someone can understand what you’re going through

There is every reason to hug everyone you love

A hug is just more than that

I put my feelings into that a lot. It wasn't easy. I'm wondering if I should use this for the talent show for next school year. What do you think of this? If this was onto 1 -10 scale, what number would it be? Please let me know!!! I'm desperate!!!!!!!

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  1. Hug can be use in dramatic time

    Hug could be our support

    Hug shows a strong bond...................I THINK IT SOUNDS BETTER WITH AN "S" AT THE END OF HUG.....HUGS CAN BE...ON ALL THREE HUG AND S TO IT.

    VERY GOOD MY VOTE IS A 9....GOOD LUCK!!


  2. 11 YOURE DOING FINE.

  3. A big TEN!

    :0)

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