Will you please tell me what you think of my poem that i wrote?

Question

The Last Summer

By: Jordyn

This

was the

last summer.

This was the

last time that

I could spend.

I didn’t know.

I didn’t know what would occur

in just 365 days…

I was clueless.

We went to Florida together.

We spent

everyday

together.

We

loved each other.

You where my pride.

My joy.

My life.

I

don’t know why.

You say

that you will tell me

when

I get old enough.

That’s

not good enough.

I love you.

So why can’t you tell?

This

was my last time.

Last time I could

call out your names

at the same time.

Divorce.

The words

“Mom & Dad”

will

never

be said in the same sentence again…

this was the last summer.

*i wrote this about my parrents devorce...

Answer 1

Wow! That was beautiful! You almost made me cry! I love it! It was the best poem I've heard in my life! That was so describing too... I could picture it and that's what poems are all about! Good Job! If I had to rank you 1-50, I would give you 50! Thanks so much for making that poem. It really made my day. =)

Answer 2

its very discribing.!! Great

Answer 3

That's so sad..but i like it :(