Will you please tell me your opinion of my poem?

Question

I would like to see what you think these song lyrics I wrote are about. I've heard a few different thoughts on another website, so I want to see if you can understand the story. Please rate as well!

"Rosie"

Watch her in silence

Study her in whispers

Wishful thinking won't save

Her from all that's done

Broken tears and broken sighs

Bleeding cuts that pour out lies

Rosie, Rosie

Can't save herself anymore

Pray for her soul

Hope for her life

Her trial had an error

Does she continue to die?

Broken tears and broken sighs

Bleeding cuts that pour out lies

Rosie, Rosie

Can't save herself anymore

Listen, listen

Does her heart beat?

Does it still beat?

Hold on

Rosie, dear Rosie

What have you done?

Answer 1

i think this is really good(Y)

i read your sterotyping thing on your profile too, thats well good!

Answer 2

I like it a lot, but I would use a different name because of the Bruce Springstein song Rosalita (it's often called Rosie).