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Question

Start of Compare and Contrast essay for college

Children living and growing up with a mom and a dad that are married used to be considered a traditional way of life. However, changes in society and culture have allowed the non-traditional unmarried, divorced, or single parents to have seperate households.This has created extreme differences in the lifestyles of children from these two types of families.

In marriage, a family comes together with a mother,father and children and build strong relationships.Divorce has never been a decision towards the child,but it explains the differences between the mother and father and the struggles and difficulties of the marriage itself.Marriage explains love in a some of words, and divorce just breaks the connection of love and sets it aside to live seperately.

At a young age children don't realize what marriage and divorce is. Although, some children must live through it and realize at an older age, what really they missed out on.Married parents are able to come together and make certain decisions together as one. But, in a divorce its up to the parents to either work as a team,or struggle with making a decision.

i wanted you guys to read this and tell me what i can work on.

fix,change,add.

Any opinion helps.

thank you so much

Answer 1

It is very good,

but in the 2nd paragraph mother, father needs a space in between it there needs to be a comma after father.

there needs to be a space after relationships.

space after child,.

comma after mother,

comma after father,

comma after struggles,

space before Marriage,

put an and after age,

a space after on. before Married

space after team

otherwise everything tht i see is correct

its very good and i agree with you in this essay

Answer 2

Stopped reading after 3 grammar mistakes.

And no, telling you where they are would just be taking the fun out of it.