Will you read this poem and rate it?

Question

can you feel the love bleeding from my heart

draining away from our very start. foolishly

waiting for your very touch while all this

time I have been missing you so much. And if

finally I could see there hasn't been a moment

I could be that person that always was the one

you could truly love. As the fog finally

clears a path through all these endless dreams

I catch the slightest glimpse of what you

truly mean and once again I am lost inside

your mind wondering if what I felt was divine.

I miss the way you whisper in my heart, the

thought of your touch, from even the very

start. If only you could see how much I really

care, and finally show you that I have always

been there.

Answer 1

Thats beautiful!! Give it to the one who it is written about. Oh I would just melt if someone wrote something like that for me.

10+

Answer 2

I swear I have been reading poems from artists of all kinds all day, and this is the best one so far! x3

11/10!!

Answer 3

beautiful, simply beautifull.

100/10

Answer 4

sounds like a song i heard b4

Answer 5

The breaks in the lines seem random.

6/10.

Answer 6

wow. that was really strong. I really liked it. 10 out of 10. It was beautiful.

Answer 7

Wow, thas really good. I wish I could write that well  O.O

Answer 8

i adored it.

it was capturing, yet truthful

and it had a bit of everything in it.

i really liked it

Answer 9

oh. my. god. yes. shell love it.

Answer 10

I, um, didn't like it.  I'd give it about a 5/10.  

It seemed unorganized and cliche.

Answer 11

out of 1- 10, 100000.........this cud be an awsome song too!!!

Answer 12

good job -  a 10

Answer 13

I love it . 10/10 from me