Will you read this poem please?

Question

it doesnt rhyme but,

The elevator doors separate

My body pushes me into it

I look at you

My favorite friend

The doors open again

Time to walk to the security zone

I'm Okay

We sit a while

Watch the line grow longer

I try to ingnore my thoughts

You look at me this time

With a different look in your eyes

Time for me to go

Come out of you

I'm still not excepting it

You hug me the last time

Seems like forever

The you walk away

I feel so light

I might just fall

Then you pass the gate

Look at me once more

My eyes already starting rain

the tears

I can't forget any of this

Please think of me while you're gone

Answer 1

holy c**p!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u wrote this????? that is soooooooo good. I LOVE IT! BRAVO>BRAVO!

Answer 2

Its pretty good..I liked it!

Answer 3

what i love the most is that it doesn't rhyme.. most rhyming poems are just words but this really does mean something.. wright alot of more poems and in the future you could put them in your own book.. and online they have poetry contest where sometimes the company who holds them makes a book of all of the winners.. like the winning poems get put into it

Answer 4

awwww....is this something that happened??  it's kinda sad , but it is very good.  

Collect your poems and then publish them!!  talent you have my dear, talent.

Answer 5

your poem is really a great the rhythm is something like a burning up of Jonas brother and the music is soft rock it feels like a best song.

Answer 6

That's fantastic! You should seriously think about publishing this poem!

Answer 7

what a great poem =D

It may not rhyme as much, but its great description like a movie playing in my head =D

Great job!

Answer 8

In my opinion it is sentences

boring sentences

unoriginal vocabulary

no rhythm

divided randomly

my opinion.

Answer 9

That is such a Fantastic poem! <3 i love it, it has Sooo much meaning!