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This is for those who have never played a game of Conkers. I do hope it is not to long, and this is the right place to submit it.

September, when the Horse Chestnut,

(Cesculus Hippocastanum) if you wish

to call it by its it’s botanic name hangs

in clusters on its parent tree. Boys look

for the tell tale splitting of its casing

which houses a much prized nut, for

Conker time has arrived.

Upwards fly the sticks and stones which

will bring to earth a much desired champion.

Darkly stained by nature and burnished by

summers suns, their prickled casing splits

asunder spewing forth into eager grubby

hands a nut worthy to take on all on comers.

With pockets weighted with their prizes,

each boy believing that within his pocked

lies a future champion in the old age game

of “Conkers”. Maybe a conker five, or even

a rare conker twenty. But boys have a habit

of adding the odd victory to their champion.

At the end of it's knotted string, you swing

your conker in a graceful arc to smash itself

against your opponents. Whoopee, yours

remains intact, while the other has developed

a split. It is now his turn, he swings and

“crack” his conker shatters. His total number

of victories were three, now making your conker

a number four.

And so the game is played through the long

summer days until all conkers have been used.

Many are spoiled as each boy tries to harden his,

so that he will have some advantage over his

opponents. But all experiments have failed, for

the secret lies in time itself, not by baking nor

by soaking in vinegar. Time, which few boys

have use for is the secret.

A boy became a youth, and sailed to the far

off land of Egypt. But he did not forget his

boyhood game of conkers. He took with him

twelve memories all threaded on a single

piece of string. They remained forgotten

at the bottom of his kit bag until he returned

home two years later.

Two years of waiting to see again the light of

day, when the secret would be revealed to him.

That which every boy had sought after; that of

possessing the hardest conker of them all, a

champion among champions, no; twelve

champions. He smiled to himself, was he the

only one who knew the secret.

It was sixty years later when he again played

a game of conkers. This time he played against

his grand son, but instead of playing with a

Horse Chestnut they played with a segmented

plastic ball.

What happened to the twelve hard conkers? They

were offered to a boy who refused them because

they were all wrinkled and hard. He liked the new

shiny brown ones straight off the tree.

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  1. Another epic masterpiece!  Your words flow with such love for your life that the reader is drawn in and shares it all as a participant.  I hoped you saved the 12 hard horse chestnuts for said grandson.  Amazing how things gain value when we grow up.


  2. The past v. the future. Perhaps we can make conkers a new Olympic sport.

  3. There is an unwonted dampness around the corner of my eye, pesky wind!

    I am blessed in that my son still plays and we are growing conkers on 'his' tree in the garden. I also live close to the small Northamptonshire village of Ashton where the world Championships are held each year on the Green outside the Chequered Skipper Pub, look them up on the web.  

  4. I shall never look at a horse chesnut tree again that I don't think of this story.Well done.

  5. It was pretty long but well worth the read. I can tell you have done this before because of the thought you put in this poem. I love how there is a story to follow and picture as the poem flows together. Thanks for sharing this. It was brilliant!!

  6. I like it, creative!

  7. A wonderful piece of writing... it is a shame so few will read it. I collect the best of what I read and put it in my own personal ebook... I will add this to it.

  8. This was wonderful!

    I took your journey through boyhood, youth, and finally to have grandchildren.  I knew nothing about conkers, and I am delighted to have found your poetry.

    Truly, you are a bard.

    T.

  9. "Twelve memories threaded on a single piece of string" is a fabulous metaphor for time itself; sir, this is another wonderfully reflective example of the writer's craft. I'll be daydreaming for weeks because of this.

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