Wine Button Girls [explicit]?

Question

*Bro-in-law wrote it.

High stockings and classy,

No skirt, but not trashy,

Just a corseted bust

With buttons down her back.

The curves of a wine bottle

With sweetness within it,

Ten bucks to win it,

But don't get me wrong -

That's only for dinner.

Smooth and flowing,

High heels and glowing,

But not just any -

Black stilettos and lace.

Silk-lined gloves with a velvety touch,

Buttermilk cold, but butterscotch warm,

A black fur scarf not covering much -

The elegant beauty of a butterly swarm.

A soft neck with pearls,

True wine button girls,

Corseted closed

With sweetness within it,

One night to win it,

But don't get me wrong -

The corset stays on.

Dazzling to the eyes

From her face to her thighs,

From her thighs to her lips,

From her lips to her hips.

From her hips to her hair,

From her hair to her back,

From her back to her front,

From her front to her rump.

A tall glass of wine, but buttoned up tight -

Not whorish, not loose, not nasty -

Just right.

Answer 1

That was beautiful, I was actually visualizing this corseted woman,  Poetry is awesome when you can see it!

Answer 2

U haven't left much details.Ur heart was ( PUMPING) in every line from the first to last, its pulses never lost pace. Waiting 4 Ur next work..!!:))

Answer 3

Tell the brother-in-law he's got game on how to describe a s**y woman without making her feel like a tramp.

Answer 4

its a creative poem

i like it

because you are not disrespecting the woman, you are complimenting her