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Question

The skin is cracked, slashed and bloodied

Bruises sting with pools a running

Bashed and broken, slashed to pieces

Vengeance now is all I think of

Can you see the hate filled eyes?

No more love, just rage and lies

Alone I stand but feel alive

Cannot stop the hate filled eye’s

Seething anger, an eagle’s crest

To sooth what’s now a broken breast

Time to heal, gain the strength

To meet again the devil’s mate

For this time all will be prepared

Battles rage on land and air

Earth cracked open, fire pours

Flesh will burn and earth will scourge

Until that day I will see

With hate filled eye’s and mind that’s free

Clean and pure the air I breath

With god’s soft breath guiding me

Fight rage on, battle till death

Release me from this pain no rest

Take me high the righteous clash

Hate filled eyes closed at last.

Answer 1

Full of emotion; well-written and angsty. I can't say I approve at all of the speaker's opinions, but it's very emotionally compelling. Thanks for sharing.

Answer 2

I think it's a really great poem. Filled with lots of evil in it but great.lol. It has a lot of passion in every word. That's what makes it great. If you please, can you rate my poem too?