I'll post the original version in details. Its meant to be mysterious and a bit ominous. I'm hoping it's something that would keep people wanting more, a teaser really. If it doesn't seem this way to you, tell me why and what I could do to improve it please.
Also if you guys just have random suggestions or grammar edits tell me! ^^
*Also, its meant to be not very detailed, I don't want to give away too much of what's to come I mean.
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