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Working on a story teaser, critiques please!?

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I'll post the original version in details. Its meant to be mysterious and a bit ominous. I'm hoping it's something that would keep people wanting more, a teaser really. If it doesn't seem this way to you, tell me why and what I could do to improve it please.

Also if you guys just have random suggestions or grammar edits tell me! ^^

*Also, its meant to be not very detailed, I don't want to give away too much of what's to come I mean.

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  1. wow, that was awesome, details good make a combination with mystery elements. fabulous, yes i want to know more! great job keep going

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