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i havent made a poem in awhile...i dont like following the "rules" of poetry. the poem is not really all that long. could you guys critique it for me...this is the first time i ever asked someone to critique my poem.as life floats byi am left behindto watch everyone elsedo what i can only dream of.they all laugh and enjoy themselvesas i am trapped behind closed doors.growing older and looking at the pastlife continues.even if it is not a blastmissing the greatest things a teen could ever experiencehaving no stories to tell one daylife floats byand all i can sayis that i watched it afarbut never stepped outnever had that chancenow i must grow upbe an adultno more time for fun and gamesthe "good" years over.life floats byand somehow i missed it.
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