Would anyone care to comment on this poem?

Question

Silent Warrior

As a youth in the 60’s

I was so angry

that she wouldn’t stand up

in her own life.

The world outside

brave and suffering

for its freedom,

its dream, its hope;

defining a new age

while she remained

afraid . . .

to speak, to fight.

Secretly she lost my respect;

I was ashamed of her weakness.

It would take many years

for me to see

how wrong I was,

how strong she had to be

silently fighting

her battles in her own way;

many of her prayers bouncing

off the ceiling

while her faith in another day

strengthened her resolve

for her children’s futures.

Answer 1

wow did u write this

pretty great

Answer 2

A fine tribute to a mother who had been raised in a time when women were expected to be Mrs. Cleaver. I am glad you finally appreciate her silent efforts.

Answer 3

It explains how many women

in that era fought battles quietly.

They were frowned on if they

voiced an opinion, stand.

The poem was heart-felt.

Answer 4

It's really nice, I dunno if its just me, but its kinda like prose, but in a more stylish (i can't seem to remember the word) way, which I consider really interesting. From me, (I don't like to rate poems) but it is really good, and i think it deserves a 10.