Would anyone like to hear some of my poetry?

Question

I have had writers' block for about a year or so. But, now that my son is going back to school, I plan to use my time wisely. One thing I want to do is to get peoples'' honest opinion about my work in the past and current. Constructive criticism only please. Remember, this if the first poem I wrote in about a year so it probably isn't that great.

I write from the heart

I write about me

I write about my feelings honestly

I write to be calm

I write to be free

I write to anyone who breathes

JLA

Answer 1

Short, sweet and simple...I like it.

I hope you find inspiration in joy and happiness rather than in pain and sadness.

Would love to read more of your stuff.

Best Wishes

Answer 2

Not bad.

Answer 3

good use of repetition.  very shot sweet and to the point.  i love it

Answer 4

I like it.

Answer 5

                    Reasons for Writing

I write poetry if I see something

I agree it comes from the heart

You can write about other things too

besides yourself.

Its always nice to be honest

writing to be calm because you would be focused on what you

are writing about.