Would appreciate your opinion on what i have written...?

Question

ok i have written this start to this book and would like ur opinion (specially if it makes sense and all coz it does to me but i not sure bout everyone else)

it is not perfect yet and i expect to revise alot on it but i thought before i bother i should make sure it is a good story

you will find to little <inserted notes> that is because i couldn't think of the thing to put there at the time... (book titles and a witty line lol) so suggestions would be appreciative

so enough about me

(i had to create a blog thing to post it becuase it was a bit to big to put in here)

http://bookforyahooanswers.blogspot.com/

Answer 1

Girl,I have to say it is quite long so I didnt read it all,but I do have to say you have the potentail to be a story writer cause you put your all into this and that in itself means you are serious about this.

  Find a publisher and see if it has the potentail (in their eyes) to get published.

You are very talented,dont let it go to waste.

  Good luck!

Answer 2

wow thats absolutely amazing! i really want to find out what happens out next.

how ironic if she ends up getting a licence and she kills off the 10 members.wow!

that&#039;s really good.publish more on,i want to keep reading!

Answer 3

Hey that&#039;s great! I love it!

Now answer mine please. :)

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