Would this be a good dark deck?? If not wat should i add or take out to make it better?

Question

this is the deck:

monsters:26

x1 reaper on the nightmare

x1 doom shaman

x1 old vindictive magician

x1 patrician of darkness

x1 stealth bird

x1 obsidian dragon

x1 newdoria

x1 snipe hunter

x1 the wicked dreadroot

x1 vampire lord

x1 goblin black ops

x1 mad reloader

x1 legendary fiend

x2 giant orc

x2 dark crusader

x1 gambler of legend

x1 byser shock

x1 d-hero defender

x1 dark-eyes illusionist

x1 nightmare horse

x1 spirit reaper

x1 demise king of armageddon

spells: 13

x1 shrink

x1 mage power

x1 dimmensional fissure

x1 dark eruption

x1 swords of concealing light

x1 monster reborn

x1 lighting vortex

x1 dark core

x1 shield crush

x1 premature burial

x1 enemy controller

x1 end of the world

x1 polymerization

traps: 10

x1 dust tornado

x1 sakuretsu armor

x1 chaos burst

x1 solemn wishes

x1 magic cylinder

x1 hate buster

x1 enchated javelin

x1 rope of life

x1 call of the eartbound

x1 compulsory evacuation device

Answer 1

looks ok

7.5/10

Answer 2

Okay...but it won't win as much as a normal dark deck...

bro, you should try this "Dark Oblivion Deck" out...

MONSTERS:24

x3 Dark Horus

x3 Dark General Freed

x3 Dark Crusader

x3 Double Coston

x3 Obsidian Dragon

x3 Peten the Dark Clown

x3 Mystic Tomato

x1 Pitch-Dark Werewolf

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Mask of Darkness

SPELLS:15

x2 Dark Eruption

x2 Allure of Darkness

x2 Stray Lambs

x1 Sheild Crash

x1 Shrink

x2 Magical Mallet

x1 Mytical Space Typhoon

x1 Monster Reincarnation

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 Lightning Vortex

TRAPS:6

x2 Crush Card Virus

x2 Call of the Earthbound

x1 Trap Jammer

x1 Magic Cylinder

Answer 3

I think you must concentrate  with one effect of a deck, here I'll show you my own dark deck!

Monsters-20

3-Mad Dog of Darkness

2-Mystic Tomato

2-Old Vindictive Magician

1-Sangan

3-Pitch Black Werewolf

3-Vorse Raider

2-White Horns D.

1-Great Maju Gazette

2-Vampire Lord

1-Kuriboh

Spell-9

1-Smashing Ground

3-Mystic Plasma Zone

1-Nobleman of Crossout

1-United We Stand

1-Premature Burial

1-Heavy Storm

1-Pot of Avarice

Trap-11

1-Dark Destroying Virus

1-Deck Devastation Virus

2-Sakuretsu Armor

1-Trap Hole

1-Bottomless Trap Hole

1-Call of the Hunted

1-Torrential Tribute

1-Widespread Ruin

1-Magic Jammer

1-Seven Tools of the Bandit

Hope this will Work!

Another Hint:

Create a Deck of your choice; It's free!

But try to put cards whose level is 4 that has an attack of 1900-2000 (unconditional) and put cards that negates effects such as negates summon, activation bla... bla... bla...

And.... Keep your deck balanced!

At least your deck has the same amount of monsters and Spell/Traps, there'll be no problem....

So.... Turn on the Duel Disk.... Pull out your Decks and Sharpen your Knowledge to Battle....

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