Would this be a plot that makes sense?

Question

Well, I have had this plot in my head for a while, but I'm not really sure if it would make sense.

So there's this man who has no memory of his life before his twenty-first birthday. All he knows is that he can't die or get old, and he acquired the powers to become a species of Phoenix that can become a human. When he is a human the side effects of the condition (Which he names "The Phoenix Effect") are heightened hormone levels and aggressivity.

He meets a sixteen-year-old who sort of tags along with him in his quest to find his memories. When she becomes his age, twenty-one, he obviously looks and feels the same age. So they... shall I say it... "hook up". This whole plot revolves around the man, James Nightingale, and the girl, Katy MacDougal. I welcome constructive critiscism and I give free hugs ot people who compliment. Thanks!

Answer 1

I think the plot makes sense (I can follow where you're going with it) and would be interested in reading more. Hope you're able to flesh it out and make millions  :)  I'd read it, and it sounds like it could be made into a multi-book series.

Answer 2

Good basis, but you will need a compelling adventure (or several) to keep the interest of the audience throughout the 5 years there. The Phoenix thing may alienate some viewers, but most would be interested enough by the amnesia to stick around. It's going to be one long story. You also need opposition. Don't forget to explain the amnesia at some point.  

Answer 3

yes that makes sece and when they hooked up mabee he would get his memory bak

Answer 4

Yeah it makes sense.Isnt that a movie?Oops I was thinking of The Curious Case of Benjamin Button.