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Would u comment? all are invited ;)?

by Guest11088  |  earlier

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Yes dear, I could I dared

To press the numbers once you me gave

Yes I could, and then I felt my heart

Beats strongly, no blood to save.

Tren, tren, tren . . . and then your voice

Revived the soul, how smooth

Caught my breath, hold my tear

Your voice traveled into the ear.

What a pleasure to hear your voice

Forget all around even the noise

Of the children were around you

Was music to dance on with you.

Formal words were spelled

Felt your anguish, made me knelt

To hear you louder, to save the tone

Of your voice, to kiss the phone.

You talked and I listened

To every sound, till you finished

The speech of you and of my

Ended sadly with "Good Bye"

Don’t know what you thought

Of me and if you caught

Your heart as I did

Not to fall from the chest.

Two weeks your voice made me happy

Till the magic has vanished and I am afraid

Of what you thought of what you said

Now I know how much I was silly.

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  1. not bad


  2. Nice.It has some power that I can feel from here.

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