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Would you PLEASE help me, with my story?

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ok, im writing this story, and its about a girl (Miley) who is goofing with her friends and accidentally breaks a computer in the library, and the librarian makes a deal that if she writes a story for the contest at the end of the month and comes in 1, 2, 3 place then she will be left off the hook, and so she writes a story, what should the story she writes be about? what should it be called? pls help me, thank you! btw she is 14, in ninth grade.

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  1. you should just start the story that she's writing from the beginning, and then at the end reveal that it was for a contest. that's how i'd approach it.


  2. To me, it seems weird to write a story in a story.

    Maybe just do her life story or something.


  3. I'm a writer as well so i'm interested to know.. are you writing this story for fun? If so, then awesome!:]

    I have a few ideas:

    first idea- I think that 14 yr old Miley's story should be about how when she was very little she discovered she had a crush on girls. now she acts goofy in front of them(hence the broken computer.) Now with this, you can make Miley a bisexual or a L*****n(up to you).

    second idea- She was writing a story about her dog that died when she was very young & she misses it dearly. She still thinks about him and cries.

    sorry i ran out of ideas. hope this helped some though!:]

    *oh and with the whole 'L*****n' idea don't get freaked out, i just was giving you a different type of idea. So your fiction would be more unique.let us know what you use!!

  4. It should be about a girl breaking a computer in the library just like what she did!!!!

    Hope i Helped!

  5. No offense but this story sounds a little bit dull actually a lot, is this for school and do you have a set topic? Tip: No one wants to read stories about mundane everyday sort of things, it doesn't mean they don't have to be realistic, but it might be better If you wrote a story about an important stage in this charectors life.  

  6. k first dont call her miley

    second of have it be about how she discovers an old chest in her attic and then she could find whatever in for instance old family secrets that she didnt want to know, money, a secret world or even just happiness

    ^^^thats kinda like a story i wrote

    :)

  7. definitely make her story about something that has happened in her life.

    like maybe;

    she moved to a new state or was adopted or something.

    goodluck!

  8. It should be a true story about something that has happened in her life or someone that has inspired her.

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