Would you comment on this lullaby?

Question

A Lullaby for Emmy

by C.S. Scotkin

Look upon this baby’s face.

See our miracle of life?

See the truth of love and grace.

Look upon this baby’s face.

Look at trusting, wond’ring eyes,

hold her close with loving arms.

No fears now can cloud her skies.

Look at trusting, wond’ring eyes.

See her promise shining bright?

May she live in peaceful times,

we will wish on stars tonight.

See her promise shining bright!

My Granddaughter is being baptized in two weeks, I wanted to give her something special.

Answer 1

mighty fine, mighty fine indeed.

what could possibly be more special than a bit of verse from grandma on a very special day ?

Answer 2

This poem is simply enchanting.  The love you feel shines through in every word. I can't think of a more meaningful gift.  She will surely treasure it throughout her whole life.  Thank you.

Answer 3

A gift of words is always special. May she fulfill her promise.

Answer 4

And so you have!  Lovely thoughts for your granddaughter.

Answer 5

The poem is really something special...

delicate, soft and beautiful...i love it very much.

Answer 6

Lovely use of repetition, beautifully metered, full of sentiment.  A poem of love and deep understanding.

Answer 7

I love it! It's so pretty. I always sing the baby mine song to my daughter. It's made me cry since I was little.  

Answer 8

It's beautiful. I think it would be great to frame and put on her wall and maybe a cross stitch pillow.

Answer 9

What could more more special than a poem from a special grand-ma.

I guarantee she will still have it at 50.I too wish that she will live in peaceful times.God Bless.