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Would you consider this style "The Broken Word"? (5-5-5-5-5-5)?

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The sun's hills are h**l-

acious but moon

has it's own ridge plan-

etary and warm

with glow holes and cram-

ped circles of light.

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  1. This is what I call "Free Form"...not to be confushed with "Free Verse."


  2. i love answering your questions but i dont get it.. just a country bumpkin

    :)

    i do know acious is pronounced shus like in audacious

  3. the second line only has 4 I think..."cious" is only 1...I'll check...

    yep!

    Always

    Edit: PERFECTION!!!

  4. Another new form!  What marvelous imagery!

  5. I'm with Regwah on this one. Round and round. LMAO

  6. i like the change to moonlight, really nice.

  7. the broken word is still alive

    hangin by the number five

    the luminous light reflects  night

    sparkles from my car under the moon light

  8. No on 'shus'.

    If you're going to go with a new form, do not confuse the reader with...uh...is 'slang' or phonetics the right word...I'll go with unusual phonetics in an otherwise phonetically great poem.

    I is awake....

  9. I am not sure I just like reading your poetry Buk!

  10. You are one of the most brilliant poets I've seen.

  11. Yes, I will consider it.

    Wow, what an inter-

    esting form and verse

    to write and intro-

    duce to Yahoo bards

    who enjoy wonder-

    ful new challenges.

  12. good edit

    I like it

  13. i am with always on this one

  14. Is this code for 'beam me up Scottie' ??

  15. shesus Buk!

    They call him the quandarer yeah the quandarer, he quandars round & round & round & round & round.
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