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Sarah met David in the wedding of her sister. She had been waiting her true love ever since and thought that he would be the man of her life, but he proved wrong.

They dance and had fun all night long. They drank and ate and they also were more united than the marriage couple. After the party, he offered to give her a lift. While they were in the car, he received a phone call that made lose his temper, he screamed and knocked the wheel. "Don't worry," he said " But you have to do me a favour." He confessed that he was a kidnapper and that the girl who he kidnapped escaped, and that she had to replace her or he would die. " My boss doesn't forgive any mistake." He drove up to a little house in the middle of field. To reach the house, they went over a ditch and entered the house which was rustic and had only one room and a keg that functioned as a lavatory. " Take this cellphone," David said " You have to let it ring, and when it stops ringing, this will be the sign that you're free.; but please don't answer it. After a few moments the boss arrived, and Sarah had to wait inside the house until they left.

She waited until the the telephone stopped ringing The she sighed and left the house. It was over.

Answer 1

Sarah met David at her sister's wedding  She had been waiting for her true love ever since she could remember, and thought that he would be the man of her life but he proved her wrong.

They danced and had fun all night long. They drank and ate and they were more of a couple than thebridge and groom. After the party, he offered her a lift in his car. While they were driving along, he received a phone call that made him lose his temper -  he screamed and hit the wheel.

"Don't worry," he said " But you have to do me a favour."

He confessed that he was a kidnapper and that the girl who he had kidnapped had escaped: he wanted Sarah to replace her or he would die.

" My boss doesn't forgive any mistake," he said

He drove up to a little house in the middle of field. To reach the house, they went over a ditch and entered the house which was primitive and had only one room and a keg that functioned as a lavatory.

"Take this cellphone," David said. " You have to let it ring, and when it stops ringing, this will be the sign that you're free but please don't answer it. After a few moments the boss arrived, and Sarah had to wait inside the house until they left.

She waited until the the telephone stopped ringing Then she sighed and left the house. It was over.

Wow.

Answer 2

Luckily, I enjoyed and was always good at english.

Sarah met David at the wedding of her sister. She had been waiting for her true love ever since and thought that he would be the man of her life, but he proved wrong.

They danced and had fun all night long. They drank, ate and they were more united than the married couple. After the party, he offered to give her a lift. While they were in the car, he received a phone call that made lose his temper, he screamed and knocked the wheel. "Don't worry," he said " But you have to do me a favour." He confessed that he was a kidnapper and that the girl who he kidnapped escaped, and that she had to replace her or he would die. " My boss doesn't forgive any mistake.", he said. He drove up to a little house in the middle of a field. To reach the house, they went over a ditch and entered the house which was rustic and had only one room and a keg that functioned as a lavatory. " Take this cellphone," David said " You have to let it ring, and when it stops ringing, this will be the sign that you're free.; but please don't answer it. After a few moments the boss arrived, and Sarah had to wait inside the house until they left.

She waited until the the telephone stopped ringing. Then she sighed and left the house. It was over.

Answer 3

Sarah met David at her sisters wedding. She had been waiting for her true love,and thought that he was the one,however she was proven wrong.

They danced and had fun all night long. They drank, ate and they were also more united than the married couple. After the party, he offered to give her a lift. While they were in the car, he recieved a phone call that made him lose his temper, he screamed and knocked the wheel. "Don't worry," he said, " But you have to do me a favour." He confessed that he was a kidnapper and that the girl who he kidnapped had escaped, and that she had to replace her or he would die. " My boss doesn't forgive any mistake." He drove up to a little house in the middle of a field. To reach the house, they went over a ditch and entered the house which was rustic and had only one room and a keg that functioned as a lavatory. " Take this cellphone," David said, " You have to let it ring, and when it stops ringing, this will be the sign that you're free.; but please don't answer it". After a few moments the boss arrived, and Sarah had to wait inside the house until they left.

She waited until the the telephone stopped ringing.Then she sighed and left the house. It was over.

Answer 4

Sarah met David at her sisters wedding. She had been waiting for her true love,and thought that he was the one,however she was proven wrong.

They danced and had fun all night long. They drank and ate and they were also more united than the married couple. After the party, he offered to give her a lift. While they were in the car, he recieved a phone call that made him lose his temper, he screamed and knocked the wheel. "Don't worry," he said " But you have to do me a favour." He confessed that he was a kidnapper and that the girl who he kidnapped had escaped, and that she had to replace her or he would die. " My boss doesn't forgive any mistake." He drove up to a little house in the middle of a field. To reach the house, they went over a ditch and entered the house which was rustic and had only one room and a keg that functioned as a lavatory. " Take this cellphone," David said " You have to let it ring, and when it stops ringing, this will be the sign that you're free.; but please don't answer it". After a few moments the boss arrived, and Sarah had to wait inside the house until they left.

She waited until the the telephone stopped ringing.Then she sighed and left the house. It was over.

Answer 5

I rewrote this piece and embellished it a little. So here it is.

Sarah met David at her sisters wedding. She has waited for her true love all her life and felt she had finally found the one. Unfortunately she was proven wrong.

Their blissful night was filled with dance, food, drink and fun. During those moments they were closer to each other than the bride and groom. After the party ended, David offered Sarah a ride home. Along the way he recieved a phone call causing him to lose his temper. He screamed and knocked the steering wheel.

"Don't worry", he said. "But you have to do me a favor."

He confessed to her that he was a kidnapper and the girl he had taken escaped. He is now forced to replace her or suffer the consequence.

Davids word staggered from his mouth, "My boss is relentless, he doesn't accept mistakes."

He turned into the driveway of a small house surrounded by a large field. On their journey through the driveway they passed a large ditch.

The was rustic and had room and keg that served as a makeshift lavatory. The shack was a hardly a home of any kind.

"Take my cell," David said "Let it ring, when it stops, you'll be free. Do not under any circumstances answer the phone."

Sarah nodded rigidly.

The few moments it took for the boss to arrive seemed like an eternity, she hid and waited until David left with the boss. The phone proceeded to ring. She watched the phone intently and shivering. The phone stopped, her time had come. She got up and walked out the door slowly drawing heavy breaths. As she crossed the ditch she looked down and saw Davids bloody forehead. Sarah turned her face quickly and made it to the road. Her nightmare had finally ended.