Would you critique this performance?

Question

this is a cover of tegan and sara's "living room"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2yGRJSNZRGg

i've been teaching myself the guitar, so go easy on me where that is concerned, and i haven't had voice lessons...ha! BUT lay it on me...what do you think?

Answer 1

very nice. i love the choice of song, thats always been my favorite T&S song for some reason. and you did a good job of putting your own style into it without wrecking it. awesome!

Answer 2

Well, not bad.  If you're serious about it though, I'd suggest voice lessons.  There are certain phrases you have difficulty with because of improper breath control.  Other than that, you've got potential. : )

As far as guitar goes, it sounded alright, the video was a bit clipped for me, so I couldn't reallyt tell if you were strumming evenly... either way, if you know to keep your hand moving in time, then bueno.

Good job.