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I signaled to my father to make one more loop around the lake. I was having so much fun! Water-skiing has to be the next best thing to flying, I thought as I glided easily over the water.

I could see our boat house getting closer and I planned to “beach” the skis and step out onto the sand just like “Fonzie” in “Happy Days.” Grandma was standing at the end of the pier taking pictures so when I let go of the rope to make my landing I gave her a big wave. Just then the baseball cap I was wearing blew off. I jerked around to try to catch it and missed. When I turned back around Grandma was running down the pier toward shore. Why is she running, I thought, and then I realized why: When I turned for my cap I changed the direction of the skis and I was headed straight for the pier! It was happening too fast! Before I had a chance to think what to do Grandma had fallen through a couple of weak pier boards into the lake.

The next thing I saw was the sun shining through the slats in the pier. I was under water! My first thought was Grandma. I shoved myself out, stumbling and wiping my wet hair from my face, looking for her. She was standing in the water about waist deep holding the camera high above her head. I almost giggled. Grandma LOVES her camera!

“Sherine, are you OK?” she said, wading toward me.

“Yeah” I said, “Are you?”

“Don’t worry about me” she said, “Your face….”

Actually my head had started to pound as soon as I stood up but I was worried about Grandma. Now that I knew she was OK I realized what had happened. I ran into the pier! With my face!! Apparently my leg hit too because it was also throbbing like crazy.

Suddenly people were coming fromall directions to help. Someone had called for an ambulance but the hospital was about twenty miles away so it would take a while. They got me situated on the pier and put ice on my face. Eventually the ambulance came and they took me away to get fixed up.

When we got back to the cottage I was hurting and exhausted. I wanted to look in the mirror. Or did I? Above my right eye was a lump literally the size of an egg. My eyes were turning black and blue and there was a bandage covering the stitches on my left cheek. Yuk!

The next day I felt a little better and everyone said I should get back on the skis. It was our last day of vacation so I did, being very careful to stay FAR away from the pier!

The following afternoon we were headed for home. My face was much more colorful now. The “egg” had turned sort of a lavender-green, both eyes and lids were a deep purple and under the bandage the stitches were poking out and crusted with blood. The whites of both eyes were solid red. Great.

The worst horror of all was going to be the next day. It was the first day of school. I was going to have to start my freshman year of High School looking like “The Elephant Man.”

*The doctor who fixed me up told my father if I had hit a fraction of an inch lower my nose would have shattered and killed me. (Whew!)

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  1. Wow! Impressive!

    I agree with the first answer. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop!

    ~*STAR*~


  2. So that was you, I was on the opposite shore eating potato salad and hot dogs. We all stopped and cheered your valiant effort. I never realizes your nose could be used as a weapon, good thing it was small.

  3. Held my breath all the way on this one...

    great writing, my friend!

  4. Good story.  Closest experience I had was the opposite direction.  I decided to let the boat drag me off the pier and into the water to start off.  I had seen it on TV.  Well, I didn't pay enough attention and neither did my cousin who was driving the boat.  Instead of pulling the slack out of the ski rope first, he started wide open with a 20 foot length of rope coiled in front of me.  Just as it tightened, I realized I should not hold on, but it was too late.  I was airborn, the skis where left on the dock, and both my arms felt as though they had been ripped off.  Not so bad as yours, but a learning experience.  The next weekend at the river and 6 tries later, I managed to get into the water with the skis.

  5. Lucky girl you are !!

    and I think I know your grandma... LOL!!

    "She was standing in the water about waist deep holding the camera high above her head"

    (or some one who resembles her)

  6. Wow. I know it is very mean to laugh at another's misery, but tell me you don't look back and laugh. I am very touched by the way you worded it. The absolute best part is where you thought something had happened to Grandma and it was really you who had the accident. Great job on the story. I am sorry for your pain, but your talent is amazing. Keep it up. Maybe you should go professional. It IS a miracle you lived to share with us. :)

  7. is this about you?

    but im sorry i wouldn't read it.

    it sounds like something you would hear on the news

    "15 year old Sherine smith (or whatever the last name is) nearly killed in a skiing accident. in Orange county california (or where ever it was)

    needs a little more content. and im a little confused is this person a guy or a girl "Sherine" then "The Elephant Man"

    ehh sorry


  8. Once I got started, I had to keep going to see what happened.  That was very good, keep up the good work.

  9. As always Reenie, a good read.Keep them coming.

  10. Reenie! I am almost afraid to answer this question, Foremost your

    story had a great flow, easy to read, and held my interest.

    Yet you wrote about one of my pet peeves. I was born at a Lake, lived the most of my life there.Your experience, is what we called the crazees, An accident waiting to happen, It got so crazy on the lake,

    our community got together, to buy bouys, placed they 200 feet from

    the shore line, rule was to cut speed, no water skiers beyond, Slowed the jet skis down too. People have been killed hitting piers, you were very lucky, to say the least. Hope your story reaches the unwise.


  11. It was good at the beginning but the ending sucked.  

  12. Haha!  That's funny.  I think you sound more like Frankenstien, but it'll be a great story to tell people!

  13. This is an excellent piece of writing! Please make sure you have a copy in a safe place for future reference.

  14. I liked it! :P

  15. Sounds good.

  16. I experimented with water skis too.  I was about 14.  I would take off from a sitting position - on the pier.  It went well - never got any splinters - in fact - I never even thought of the splinters that I might get.  When I came in - I coasted - always too short - a foot or two from the pier - I would stop. Nothing as noteworthy as your landings. Glad you survived ♥

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