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I'm throwing my problems into the river of life,

doing all I can possible so they don't find me twice,

holding on as tight as I can to my life line,

I've got memories that will last me a life time,

this time I won't want to do what needs to be done,

this time I wont be late

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  1. It's good... I sort of annoy myself, even, when I share my problems.


  2. I like this poem

    it is short and sweet

    however it talks about

    life because you are throwing

    away your problems in the river

    You are throwing them someplace

    they won't find you

    Also you have enough memories

    I take by the last two lines

    there are situations you are avoiding

    As well as timing

  3. Very nice =) I like it!!  The rhyming AABB is very simple and yet very effective!

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