Would you like to read the poem i wrote when my niece sadly died?

Question

Just look at you

you pretty thing

the tears do make

my sad eyes sting

My heart does ache

my first born neice

for the angels sent you

down on lease

it isnt fair

it pains your mum

the day they said

you time has come

but we must remember

when we're sad

you feel no pain now

for that were glad

so precious

and so missed aswell

sarahs pretty

angel girl

who brought with her

that special touch

a tiny person

loved so much.

Answer 1

this is a perfectly lovely poem.  I like it alot.

Answer 2

absolutly lovely

you must have loved her

Answer 3

PATHETIC

Answer 4

Jim L why would you read the poem if you feel this way? the question is obvious!!!

The poem is beautiful and heartfelt and appreciated by all those who have lost a child in the family as well as those who enjoy poetry.

Answer 5

Very very sweet, and so sorry for your loss!!  She would have been proud to see your poem!!!

Answer 6

The above answerers are responding to news of the event, not your poem.

It reminds me of the verse George Best's relative recited at his funeral.

He (and you) would have shown more dignity in suffering grief in silence than in foisting this stuff on us.

Well, Firefly, she did ask us to read it!  You seem to think the subject by itself makes it good.  No it doesn't.

Answer 7

You are both very lucky to have had each other, even if it was for such a short time. Your poem is beautiful, and one day you will be glad you wrote it and it will bring you comfort.

Answer 8

What a beautifully rendered poem, full of deep feeling of love and compassion.

Congratulations on a well penned verse.

Robert