Would you please comment ?

Question

I am in a state of utter confusion

brought about by the guilt and despair

and certainty that Life is illusion

so real and so cruel, often so unfair .

I blame myself for things I said,

and I blame the relentless doubt

that crept insidiously and mad

over my reason, that cries and shout.

That Illusive forgiveness so rarely

inhabits the cold hearts of Humankind,

for forgiving is greatness, especially,

if the guilty are noble and kind.

I let not darkness somber my day

for true happiness just dwells so near

imploring attention, especially today,

and I smile at Life so sweet and dear.

Answer 1

So sweet and dear

Keep smiling at life

For, to be forgiven

Is not your decision

Blame can only

Serve to a point

Evolution will force

The hand to submission

It is a chosen reality

A visual duality

The usual two sides

To every story, as they say

The preservation of an argument

Simply a want

for dis-engagement  

A mathematical equation

The multiplicity to division

The division into subtraction

The subtraction into elimination

The path to connection

The connection

To an elongation

A smile

:)

My attention, you implored

Dear Stranger, you have it

If I may say, in my amateur way

Your are a fine poet

Of which I'd like to hear

More-so of.

  

Answer 2

You write better when inspired with love, live long and well, and loved be.

Answer 3

Thats pretty deep.

But i liked it :)

If you wrote this, then your extremally talented

x*x

Answer 4

very good.:)

Answer 5

This is how I feel to answer that..

Sweet gentle breeze touching my heart

as foggy as winter with feelings of love

Fragrance of flowers never ever lasts

Misty looking cottons on the grass..

Deep velvet night as sunset had passed,

Beauty of nature suddenly was dispatched,

But still the brilliant moon and twinkling of stars

Light up the night with a glow of love..

It is quite simple, But this is how I truly feel in my heart eversince and this is how I really live in my very own heart.

No matter how darkness may seem to cover up one's moment in anyone's life, There will be always light at the end. It's just because its also nature. Be always true to the heart and never feel overcomed by doubts anymore. To cherish and hold the love that you already know was true and right there before you..Then never to get deceived by fancy illusions anymore...

Good Luck dearest..