Would you please rate/fix my Cloudian Deck(Yu-Gi-Oh)?

Question

OK, here it is, after much planning, its almost complete.

Monsters:23

1 Cloudian-Eye of the Typhoon

3 Cloudian-Sheep Cloud

3 Cloudian-Acid Cloud

3 Cloudian-Cirrostratus

3 Cloudian-Altus

3 Cloudian-Ghost Fog

2 Cloudian-Nimbusman

2 Cloudian-Turbulence

3 Cloudian-Smokeball

Spells:17

3 Diamond-Dust Cyclone

2 Fog Control

2 Cloudian Squall

1 Double Summon

2 Sanctuary of the Sky

1 Salvage

1 Pot of Avarice

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Heavy Storm

1 Swords of Revealing Light

2 Enemy Controller

Traps:6

1 Spirit Barrier

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Natural Disaster

1 Updraft

Side Deck

2 Shrink

2 Judgment of Anubis

2 Dust Tornado

1 Brain Control

1 Fog Control

1 Sangan

1 Magical Mallet

1 Return Soul

1 Giant Trunade

1 Monster Reborn

1 Summon Cloud

1 Spirit Barrier

Ok, there it is. Dont be an a**, or I will report the answer you give. Thanks.

Answer 1

8/10, just because there isn't a lot of those decks... clouds are fun.

add probation or something that will stop a few specific spell/traps.  the cards are(as I can think of) area limit area B, stumbling??(all summoned creature go to defence mode).  because if claudian go defence, they go byebye, so any cards in general that will force creature to D mode is bad for you(include wingstorm or 0 gravity too) a few ppl might carry them in deck/side deck, or cards that switch target creature's positon(like that gemini, which switch attack target, and if target die to effect, # of monster change so redeclare target and so on..... 1 creature an entire field dies...) as long as you can make sure those kind of things don't happen, claudian does fun.  I would run a copy of final attack order too, sweet card to use, so your abilities won't back fire on you.

Answer 2

There are two staple spell/trap removal card, but alot more negation. If your concerned about protecting spells run destrution jammer, or dark bribe.

Also you might want to set the turbulance/smokeball count to 2/2. Like you siad smokeballs are easy to get out. Also try a mother grizzly.

If you are going to abuse smokeballs run things like card of safe return, and share the pain/ enemy controler. that way you can continually recycle the smoke balls, maby even reviving more than once per turn.

Answer 3

Lack of Cloudian - Storm Dragon = Average at best

There's no reason to run Spirit Barrier if you only have 1 copy of it.

Not all Cloudians and their support are created equally. If you are deadset on using the Spirit Barrier combo, than here.

Monsters: 21

2 Cloudian - Eye of the Typhoon

2 Mobius the Frost Monarch

2 Mother Grizzly

3 Cloudian - Altus

3 Cloudian - Nimbusman

3 Cloudian - Storm Dragon

1 Sangan

3 Cloudian - Cirrostratus

2 Cloudian - Acid Cloud

Spells: 13

3 Cloudian Squall

2 Summon Cloud

1 Salvage

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Swords of Revealing Light

2 Enemy Controller

Traps: 7

3 Spirit Barrier

2 Dark Bribe

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

Total: 41 cards

Side Deck: 15

1 Abyss Soldier

1 Marshmallon

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Diamond-Dust Cyclone

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Salvage

2 Shrink

3 The Sanctuary in the Sky

1 Dark Bribe

2 Dust Tornado

1 Rain Storm

Answer 4

I would add another nimbusman. I would take out at least 1 sheep cloud because what if their destroyed you have tokens that are useless except for tributes. If you are going to keep the sheep clouds I would put in creature swap to get rid of them. I would add zeradias because it can get sanctuary in the sky out quicker and it has 2100 atk and it's 4 stars. I'd get ridd of 1 natural disaster and add another spirit barrier or 2. There's also not much point to have 3 of nearly all the cloudians when you only have 3 tribute cards so I would take out at least 1 of every cloudian that you have 3 of except smoke ball because you obviously like it and it dosn't do any harm.

I hope this helped!

Kayne.