Would you rate my custom E-Hero Deck?

Question

Ok well rate this deck and be harsh!

Monsters: 21

2x E-Hero Avian

2x E-Hero Clayman

2x E-Hero Sparkman

1x E-Hero Burstinatrix

1x E-Hero Bladedge

1x E-Hero Bubbleman

2x E-Hero Wildheart

1x Jinzo

1x Wroughtweiler

2x Command Knight

2x Marauding Captain

1x E-Hero Heat

1x E-Hero Lady Heat

1x Spirit Reaper

1x Big Eye

Spells: 18

3x Reinforcement of the Army

3x Polymerization

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Fusion Gate

1x E- Emergency Call

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Miracle Fusion

1x Wave-Motion Cannon

1x Skyscraper 2 Hero City

1x Swords of Revealing Light

1x Future Fusion

1x Mage Power

1x Pot of Avarice

1x The Warrior Returning Alive

Traps: 11

2x Dust Tornado

1x Mirror Force

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Magic Cylinder

1x Raigeki Break

1x Compulsory Evacuation Device

1x Draining Shield

1x Sakuretsu Armor

1x Fairy Box

1x Wall of Revealing Light

Thanks Guys!

Answer 1

all right!! ^_^ it's good this is what i call big city style hero deck cool 9/10 it be a grate competeder agenst my deck!! ^_^

Answer 2

Firstly:

You should probably report William for his abuse to other users.

Secondly:

Your deck is ok, but not nearly as good as it could be. Elemental Hero decks can be the worst decks ever made, but when made correctly, they can be one of the most consistant decks makable. You should probably dop the idea that you currently have and try to make your deck axactly like this one...

s flame x3

s phoenix x3

necroid x3

wildedge x3

plasmavice x3

wildwing x3

giant x3

bladedge x3

necroshade x3

wildheart x3

stratos

sparkman x2

king of the swamp x3

dark world dealings x3

card destruction

polymerization x3

the warrior returning alive x3

fusion recovery x3

premature burial

e-emergency call x3

reinforcement of the army x2

heavy storm

monster reborn

mirror force

hero counterattack x3

ok, first thing you're going to wanna do, put necroshade into the grave. then summon Bladedge without tribute for beatdown, fusions are minor support, but can otk, which made this build heavy storm-worthy i wont go too far into this deck's strategy, as it's more than fairly self explanitory, just try it out, trust me, you'll love it.