Would you read my poem?

Question

Me ?

Clink, clonks in endless rolls

Shadowed by night, it hides a soul

Safe it is from stomping feet

A side, if only more could see

Off it bounces to the tunnel

Through a maze of dark that's summoned

A little shimmer in the dirt

Dirtied heart, it will not hurt

A journey made, for many known

But for our rolling coin

Death does wait in coming hole

Or in winter's covered snow

But all it can is surely roll

And wait for one to see there's more

Answer 1

A unique spin on death.  Excellent penning.

Answer 2

I liked it.

Answer 3

i liked it  keep posting them up so i can read them  and if you put them on a website can you send me that address....

Answer 4

Like it. I think you should write some more and put them on a website.

Answer 5

that is a nice poem. i like it because it provokes a lot of thought. mostly because you don't really know what its about. i'd have to say my favorite line is "Dirtied heart, it will not hurt. . ."

Answer 6

i like this 1 also do what you do keep writing  .......

Answer 7

I like this poem.

I too agree that you should make more poems and post them.

Answer 8

thats a nice poem!