Would you tolerate another of my poems?

Question

Mach 1, speeding up to mach 2.

Fly carefully, lest the red planet rocks you,

Or mocks you.

So journey through the heart of a poet.

Landing on the Euwaite Field, so don't blow it.

The captain's voice sneaks,

From the speakers to speak,

Rather quickly,

Like his mouth has just sprung a leak.

The seat belt signs do a flash dance.

Donna Summers must be singing our Last Dance,

Maybe this is my last chance.

To orbit around under billions of stars,

Before I make a crash landing on Mars.

Answer 1

Absolutely... I would love to and it is not tolerating, it is called enjoying.

Answer 2

A rap about landing on Mars! A first! We will never crash; we will make a soft landing, I promise you.

Answer 3

Great, now I got that song stuck in my head.  Toot toot beep beep.  

Great space tale.  More poetry should be written about the Red Planet.

Answer 4

yeah...i think so...coz your poem is fun to read....

Answer 5

this was exciting!!!!!!!!

Answer 6

You're killing me. I have been busy. I almost missed this. Did you get "War and the Poet, Richard Eberhart" from the library yet?

Answer 7

We tend to tolerate that which we like much more than that which we don't.