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Writing Peice Your Opinion Please?

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Through her battered eyes, she cries no more.

Her beaten soul screams into the night, no one can hear her pleading.

She will scream, she will cry, she will lie.

Open your eyes boy.

Can't you see?

It's not a dream.

She looks through the mirror straight to the wall.

Her reflection disappears, mindlessly she roams the earth.

She will not be held down

Boy you better run.

Haven't you heard mess with one, mess with all?

It's not gonna last.

(please comment on what you think about this.This is uncompleted and I guess I'd like it if i could have some help getting over writers block lol. Another thing, I'm so bored I'm about to try slamming a revolving door O_O its like 2:19am lol)

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  1. i read that other guy's answer about publishing things, but idc if mine gets stolen b/c i'm not publishing this stuff...

    that's very good, wanted more.  lol.  Will you email me and tell me what you think of mine?  they're myspace blogs...i don't expect you to read them all.  lol.  thanks either way...

    -Tanner

    http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseac...


  2. is really nice

    continue you work

  3. It looks awsome BUT never post you own personal literature online because now anybody can take it and call it their own.

    Jackmac :P~

  4. This is really awesome.

    It reminds me of myself a while back.

    I love the way you've written this; it's great.

    Keep writing!

    =]

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