im still in the process of writing but heres a little bit of it.
and its still in kind of a poem form but im gonna fix that later.
Familiar Face.
Everyday as i pass through the crowds
feeling lonley and invisable,
i see this face.
Brown hair, brown eyes
its seems so commom
but theres something thats not.
The way he looks at me
like i exist
i turn to look back
but he turns away like nothing is here.
And when i got to sleep at night
i dream about the familiar face.
Then when i wake up in the morning,
i rush out the door to do my daliy runs
just to be hypnotised
by this perfect familiar face.
Catching a glimpse of the familiar face
passing by i fallow.
thats all i got so far.
what do u think? is it good? what can i do to make it better?
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