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Writing book part 3?

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After finishing eating oleg went to the car where there family driver dimitry was waiting for him. All that oleg could think about on the way to school was to what him and his dad where going to do. But when they got to school that changed a little bit, his friends where sitting in the cafeteria talking about the a boy that tried to make fun of Russians. They where planning to teach him a little lesion but where waiting for oleg because he was the best fighter out of the group. That was because he was taller than most boys his age and his dad toke him to learn how to fight in a way of Russians called the “SYSTEM”. Even though he was not an adult he could still beat kids that where 3-4 year older than him. So when the Russian saw that oleg was coming they got exited. After a few minutes of telling oleg what happened, they talked him in to kicking the kids ***. So the whole group of Russians a total of 12 went for a “walk”. After a few minutes they found the guy near the boy bathroom hitting on a Russian girl that oleg liked. Her name was Ireana and they have hit it off a few times. Now this pissed oleg to the point that he did not even try to take the kid outside but just started to beat the **** out of the kid in the hall way. With all the Russians standing around him like nothing was going on there was not a lot of atension on them. This was because every body was ether scared of the Russians or they just did not care. After about 3 minutes oleg was done. The kid was on the floor with a broken nose and a few missing teeth. But oleg was not with out a scratch. He got punched in the eye and it turned red a bit around the sides. But that was a small price to pay to be know as The Russian. He looked at the girl, she smilled at him and gave him a kiss on the check. Then Oleg and Ireana went to class. By luch Oleg had forgot all about his birth day and was thinking more about Ireana. He was hoping that she would come to his party and maybe they could hang out for a while. She looked at him and saw that he was staring at her and she kind of blushed. He looked away quickly and started to talk to his friends. The rest of the school day was like any other day except that he got called in to the principls office. The kid was siting out side the office with his parents. When oleg walked by they looked at him in disapproval. But he did not care he was Russian so it was ok for him because this was not the first time that it had happened. When he went in to talk to the principle he was calm and smilled a little. The principle showed him a seat that he could sit down in and opened up a folder with his name on it. And started to read all the bad stuff that oleg had done most of them were fights. But oleg knew that if he got in to fights and did not lose then his dad did not care. But only as long as he won. The principle started talking about the how it is bad to fight but oleg was no longer listing. He was thinking what he was going to do when he got home. All this talk about talking to olegs parents reminded him that he and his dad where going to do something to day. And then ireana came to his mind. He was wondering what she was doing at the moment and is she was going to come to his party. But then life snapped back into focus when the principle told him that he was suspended from school for two weeks and that his parents would have to come and pick him up. He wondered what his mom would say she was always agenst fighting. and if his dad went somewhere he would have a long talk on the way home how not to fight. The principle told him to go wait outside of his office for someone to come and pick him up. After about half an hour to his suprize there family driver dimetry came to pick him up. On the way home they talked on how the fight went and what are they going to tell his mom. When they where about a block away dimitry stoped and then oleg saw why they stoped. There was a swat truck in front of there house. And as they started to drive up to the house dimitry pulled out his gun and took the safety off. They saw 4 man in full gear jump out of the truck and one of them had grabbed a ram to bust down the door. When he walked up to the door and knoked it down. Oleg heard gun fire. And the man with the ram fell to the floor and started to bleed…. A truck had pulled up in front of the house and the only one that noticed it was Alex. Oleg’s grandfather, he was here because it was oleg birthday and he taught that it was going to be a boring day but then he saw that the people that where running out of the truck where dreesed in black and they had guns. Alex yelled it’s the cops and pulled the shotgun from under the seat….. Jim was going over every thing in his head as he pick up the ram and started toward the door. It was a good option to make $15,000 for a small job.

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  1. Part 3 is interesting - could use some more editing. Looks like I'll have to look up the other parts so I know what the heck is going on.


  2. Wow, paragraphs and grammar much? You're allowed to use punctuation. Plus, this isn't a fiction site; go put it on fictionpress.com or something like that.
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