Writing songs...help???

Question

So i've asked this question a few times before but i never get any really helpful answers. Maybe somebody will help me this time.

I want to write a song about A boy and a girl who are best friends and have been for years but the girl is in love wiht him but hes in love with someone else. They share all their secrets with eachother but this is the one thing the girl can't tell him because she doesn't want to ruin their friendship because he never stays friends with his ex girlfriends.

This is a true story about me and my best friend. Can someone help me write the chorus and i can do the rest...i am just drawing a blank!

Answer 1

People cant really help you if you want the song to be genuine. Write from the heart. Think about your feelings and all of the situations you've been in with your best friend and just try to form words to all of your emotions. If its really close to your heart, you should not have a problem. Just let it all flow out, dont worry about time, beats, measures or rhyming. Just let it all out

Answer 2

I really enjoy writing songs so i just wrote this.  Im kinda in the same situation so here it is.  Hope you like it.  I think it would be the chorus.

how hards it for you to see

the way i feel around you

dont you see the difference in me

My heart beats, my smile shines

the butterflies inside me

they break free

because best friends is all we'll ever be

Answer 3

and i'm fading fast in your arms tonight boy

feels like it's only you and me

yeah fading fast in your arms tonight

i think this was meant to be.

not very good lol. first thing that came to mind (:

Answer 4

In my heart I want you, I bleed for you, long for you.  But, I know that you and I can't for if I took you I might never get you back.

I know they aren't the best but they are something to work on.