This is a song I wrote, as I am a dancer. Anyone is free to comment on this and give me some feedback. It makes a lot more sense to any serious dancers out there, this one's for us!
Any feedback would be amazing, as in if what your idea of this song is about. You're comments will help me make it an actual poem (this one is pretty rough). I appreciate it. Thank you!!!
* In Love and Dance *
A simple story I sing along
A somebody with a passion
The relationship of love and pain
All in connecting with the art of dance
Just someone who dreams big
Always with disappointment involved
But what trips her only makes her stronger, people say
Lifes not always what it seems
Another carries her heart and allows her to fly
Without trying, he knows just how
She knows the truth behind it all
but still you make everything feel alright, so right.
And there she falls asleep to a love song
A sigh of joy as she dreams of something special
Opens her eyes, shes beside a blank wall,
Another day gets added to being alone
Enlightened by a dark room
Surrounded by a bare floor
A beat of music is all she needs,
Moves her body to her feelings of dispair
A glance in the mirror at the reflection
Two steps backward; wonders if shes proud of who she is
Four steps forward; water in her eyes and a rough yet little smile
And so she danced because it was the only thing that made perfect sense
Rhythums of sadness seem to be her favourite
It allows her to glide around this place
She doesn't want this moment to go away
Because finally she feels the courage to continue with her unchanged self
This space of desire, and hope brings magic
At least, she feels alive and that she belongs
Feeling so free
Dance is her heartbeat. This dance Floor is her breathing room.
Back to reality
Where it's the place to bring her down hard again
Always on the same ride you put me on
You'll never catch her, oh there she goes dancing flawlessly
Cuz dancing picks her up off the dirt life brings
Keep making my life a living h**l and push me down
I will surprise you, I can make it, over and over again
Dancing keeps her higher and better than you.
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