Wrote another poem..Do you like it?

Question

along the way

searching for an answer

another town another day

the thoughts consume me like cancer

will i ever find it

or will i give up and quit

no one knows how it feels

no one to take the blame

it still feels so sureal

this is getting real lame

everyone just assumed

said my soul is doomed

now because of you

my life is over

first my wife, now me too

our lives on earth are over

honest opinions please!

Answer 1

i agree.. i cant really decide who you were talking to... other than that it was well written

Answer 2

hard to understand what you are talking about but I liked reading it.

Answer 3

not as good as the first but keep trying

try and make some sense of what u write

Answer 4

yes, it's really good I like it.

It's not very clear who you are talking to

"..because of you.."

is it God you are talking to?