Seems unfinished to me. And I don't like the 'hope' line, what should I add to it? Any suggestions would be most helpful. Its nice not to write about something melancholy for a moment... although, the tone is still a little bluesy, what do you think? Thanks guys.
Midnight
Midnight means
Streetlights
And lip-locked lovers
Strolling the rain drenched streets.
Midnight is a stolen kiss;
Seductive in its innocence.
The moon is pregnant with
Hope,
Hidden behind
Gossamer clouds.
Midnight is serenity.
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