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Wrote this Poem a while ago, what do you think?

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This poem was inspired partly by Dylan Thomas' "Do Not Go Gently Into That Good Night"

"Good Faces and not so bad ones"

now his six oclock shadow has ticked to, seven-or-eight

and he comes home through that white picket gate

it rains and he wears the face of an apparition

as the tired man tugs his self up the drive, I see him mutter with my eyes,

Another day

another life

alot of faces pass me by

i could have known

i could have learned

what I should have been,

If this is the someday I dreampt of, when I was a boy, I might as well go.

Down into the earth, where I will never find out, how great I could have been.

And I say no no , dont give up hope, dont sit and watch your life play out, dont be so hard, dont be so hard

He opens a white frame door washed pearl by the rain and says, all those faces not so near to me

good friends gone for I am a "nice guy"

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  1. cool dood!


  2. its AMAZING! Wow thts wel good.

  3. truth inspiring nice love it it feels like home

  4. Congratulations, it's v. inspiring and looks like you worked hard :)

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