Wrote this poem on a whim, needs a name?

Question

And I just want you guys to read it and tell me how you liked it/ how you interpret it. :] So here we are:

I'm blind, so it seems.

My words, are like dreams:

Faint and fleeting.

My heart is beating,

Or so it seems.

I'm deaf, I suppose.

This smell, it's a rose:

Sweet and flowing.

My pulse is slowing,

Or so I suppose.

I'm numb, I recall.

This taste, is like Fall:

Dark and dying.

My life is crying,

Or so I recall...

Answer 1

The logic of sense

Answer 2

best answer plzzz!!! Name of poem  "Can you feel it"?

Answer 3

thats really pretty

no it wasnt hard to tell it was about dying.

I interpret it as someone in the "median of living"(could be a title, or "living in/as median") so to say.

someone is dying but still there

in the first verse..loosing vision, words that dont really come out, "faint and fleeting, my heart is beating" so it's still beating...you think

i could keep going...but you would have a page pretty much explaining what you already wrote.

:) but that was good.

i write poetry too.

Answer 4

A Day Until Sunset.

Answer 5

A good title would be "Shut Down" I suppose but God, how morbid!  Someone needs to go find her happy place!

Answer 6

i think the name "these sences" or "the sences"

Answer 7

I like it.  You should have gone for all four seasons tho you only named fall, the rose could be spring.  I would call it A Change of Season.

Answer 8

Last Call to Fall

Answer 9

im sorry but that just sucks.

Answer 10

sense less? maybe, but I did like it very much.

Answer 11

I think its great, for a title maybe: The Death Senses.

Answer 12

I think you should call is "Numb"  that the  overall feeling of the poem.  that is how you feel sometimes when someone close to you dies.....