Yeah, tell me if this paragraph makes you think i know what the h**l im talking about. easy ten poiinnnnnnttzz

Question

The most unique and imaginative people are required; as well as every type of art collaborated together. My most vital dream in life is to one-day take on the role of a great director such as Walter Salles, Steven Spielberg, and Martin Scorsese. Not only to convey my ideas with the world, yet to prove to myself how much change and visions I am capable of creating within the film industry. The challenge for expansion of new work is never ending. This chance to produce amazement makes an artists career immeasurably worthwhile and rewarding!

Fix and grammar issues for ten points.

And tell me what ya think. It's my ending paragraph.

Answer 1

First sentence, I'd use a comma instead of a colon. Also one-day is two words, not one - one day. And it's great! Definitely sounds like you know your stuff :-)