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Question

Demused-Evolution of a Poet IV

The blood

ran into rivers

of ink,

and out of those rivers,

she made a mirror.

Away from the world,

I was beautiful.

Away from the world,

my pain had a face,

my own,

and I wrote it

with her name.

Answer 1

Oh, my.  This is just stunning.  The imagery is incredible and gives a deep understanding of the situation.  Where we are coming from is illuminated here, but where we are going is still an enigma. This is intense.  Thank you.

Answer 2

A muse making river-blood mirrors... how visually thrilling and poetic... you know me, I am rooted in the visual... and this delivers!

Answer 3

Someday...you have got to turn the mirror around...hehehe