Yet again, another poem!?!?!?!?

Question

We'll be stronger-

I've hurt the ones that love me,

My lies hurt everyone, I've come to see,

But if you could just forgive,

being angry is not a good way to live,

You have no right to judge,

Who are you to hold a grudge,

We'ver all made our wrongs,

we all know where the blame belongs,

what doesn't kill us can only make us stronger,

so hold on even when it seems you can't hold on any longer,

I've hurt the ones that love me,

and the ones that love me have hurt me too,

but betrayal is something we'll all eventually have to go through.

♥WWP

Answer 1

its good! =)...can i use it ..to make a song?..email me

Answer 2

I like it but the very last paragraph, or w.e you want to call it/

"I've hurt the ones that love me,

and the ones that love me have hurt me too"

Im not saying its bad, im just critisizing. It sounds a little akwars. Because you used the ones that love me twice. Over all i think it is an exellent poem. Good job :)