Yet another one of my poems?

Question

This is one that I wrote a while back. It's another one based on love, but I think that in the end it brings out the best, showing how devotion and dedication sometimes are all it takes. Just wanna hear thoughts (constructive criticism only please no one needs unwarranted insults)

I call this one Weeping Beauty

Weeping beauty weeps

Like Sleeping beauty sleeps

When true love comes to call

The curse shall fall.

However long it takes

How much pain it makes

Waiting on the only one

Waiting for the sea of darkness to see sun

One day my prince shall come

Answer 1

:)

your poem made me smile, and its so true .... thanks for sharing it

Answer 2

It is beautiful....because it is YOUR poem.

Answer 3

it was pretty bad tbh

Answer 4

You shouldn't tie up your chances for happiness in gaining romantic love. Go out and do something meaningful in your life, instead of waiting around for a "prince." It'll do wonders for your self-esteem. No man can make you you.

Love is wonderful, but try to learn to love yourself.

Feminism: try it out. It's healthy.

This is meant kindly, just so you know. I have problems with the ideas expressed in your poem, but that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with you. Those ideas have the allure of being "romantic," and we all wish for a fairy-tale life sometimes. But think about it: would you really have respect for yourself if all you ever did was wait to be loved? If all you ever were was someone's wife?

Answer 5

hmm..I do like the other one..better...