Yet another poem-check it out =]?

Question

Unanswered

It’s the bittersweet of the unknown

Speechless words it silently moans

Endless circuits trying to connect

Searching for answers which are not direct

Reliable feelings unable to fulfill

The necessary extent of your residing will

Leaving you baffled and unknowing

What is the state of unease that is growing?

Feeling insignificantly small

Trying to find a crack in this relentless wall

Shadows fill the edges of the mind

Holding light captive, for the time it binds

Searching for a presence, yearning for the slight of touch

Something or anything to recognize when the burdens to much

The slight breeze in a broad open space

The winds of emotion leave no trace

Feeling okay when you know something’s not

Desperately searching for the cage in which you’re caught

Leaving you only with the sense that things are unanswered and need to be found

These are the guidelines by which you are bound.

Answer 1

wow... i really like it but one tiny thing of critcism

Feeling okay when you know something’s not

Desperately searching for the DOOR OF THE cage in which you’re caugh

but i really love it

Answer 2

Reads like the clues you'd get with a treasure hunt but I like it.  It's really beautifully said.

If you wish to have it read with more flow, perhaps you should change the structure and combine lots of the lines together for a better flow.

I have to say it's so meaty in content, you could pull half of this out, streamline it, and write several other poems springboarding off this one!  It's wonderful.